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"For James"

Brave little boy, fighting an ugly disease,
his fragile heart, is so eager to please.
A million friends, that is all he ask for,
not for the world or a brand new shiny car.

His inner light, it shines for us to see,
he smiles in his pictures, for you and me.
This brave little boy, has touched my heart,
in life or death, our friendship shall never part.

Be brave little soldier, fight with all your might,
and for now TexasMomma, bids you a goodnight.

                             

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This is a poem I wrote for James a little boy that is battling cancer and he has a myspace and his goal is to get 1 million friends before he passes away!
here is the link to James's myspace if you would like to add him as your friend!

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=100541969&MyToken=464e8f0a-8271-4f82-a2fb-b5fff3f5c978

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  • brittany.geeze
    December 10, 2007
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    Aww well the kid sounds amazing!

  • ch3mical
    December 8, 2007
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    very sweet and very good idea .Great,divine


  • Angel w o Wings
    December 7, 2007
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    Very angelic of you to stand up for this child to achieve a wonderful goal. Bless your heart.


  • BeyondMoonlight
    December 7, 2007

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    I have a MySpace account but I can't remember the specifics...=/. I guess I could make a new one just to add him as a friend.

    Very good, touching write.


  • stavykm gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    So Precious

    What a precious write this poem. I love it. How sad this little boy is sick, but he gets what the true meaning of life is!! This makes me feel very grateful because your poem reminded me of what I need to hear and remember. It's not the things, it's those special relationships. Thank you for sharing with me.
    Blessings
    Kelle Marie,
    stavykm


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    Do not have MySpace, but I am sure many on here do. Such a sad situation, yet I am sure this is a way that others can help make his dream come true. Sentiments well expressed in these words.


  • Ithica silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    Oh I almost forgot... You should post his link, many who have a MySpace would probably be honored to join his list of friends... ???

  • Ithica silver member
    December 7, 2007
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    What a treasure we will lose when this little boy passes! And this really is such a small request in the light of the internet and all of our technology! Too bad all that technology couldn't find a cure for him. This little boy with the heart of a saint...


  • jcat gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    How wonderful of you to write something so heartfelt and beautiful to him!!! If I had myspace I would add him as well!!!! Since I don't I will keep him in my heart for always... I hope with all my heart that he breaks his goal of a million.... Best wishes in the contest!!


  • PureRomance
    December 6, 2007

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    awwwwww this is so sweet. You did a really excellent job with this poem. I agree with Tarja as well. You are an amazing and wonderful and very caring woman. God bless you and I too, would love to add him to myspace as well. God bless you and him both and Best wishes to you in the contest.


  • Tarja
    December 6, 2007

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    This was so amazing. You are an extremely kind woman to write this for him! And thank you for showing it to me... if you don't mind I would love to add him to my myspace. Good luck in the contest darling. This was heartfelt and enduring.


  • rustynite silver member
    December 6, 2007
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    Add Dave to your list James. smile.


  • Angelic Princess21
    December 6, 2007

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    this is really sweet and sad. you did a really great job writing this. thanks for sharing this amazing write.
    s


  • whiterabbit.
    December 6, 2007

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    aw this is so sad but a really great write. It's so sad to watch people have to deal with things like that. This is such a sweet poem and I wish the best for him. I hope he reaches his goal.


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    December 6, 2007

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    awww....this is so sad and sweet at the same time I would love for you to send me the link. You did a great job with this. Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you!

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