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[ as i sit here with my hands over these ]

as i sit here with my hands over these
eyes of mine the ones filled with the tears
you caused me as you broke my heart once again
i told you i loved you many times
over and over again
but all i get back is Did you say something?
i do so much for you
even though i know you dont notice once
but i cant stop myself from doing stuff
for you and loving you
because you make me happy even if you cause me
all types of pain
but all types of happieness too
but here i am with a broken heart once again
and in the end you just caused me more pain
than i wanted from this love

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  • ZachP silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    your last two lines sum up something that I imagine most young people feel in a relationship... it's somewhere I've wwalked several times.

    Thank you for this wonderful scribe good luck.