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Darkness

Open hell's doorway
Give light to those who seek it
And beware the storm.

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Since haikus are about nature I'm pretty sure this ain't haiku, I forget what you'd call it. Anyway, something random based off all the christian studying I've been doing in school. ^_^ Enjoy!
Cj

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  • Dlvvanzor
    December 22, 2007
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    Hmm. I like it.

    -Dlvvanzor


  • Mishi-Ragdoll
    December 7, 2007

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    daaaaaaaamn this is deep. that's why i love short poems. short, weet, and straight to the point. i loved this poem.