Cloaked in darkness
Seen by the few
Who she felt was worthy
Of her company
Spreading twisted ideas
Into their once innocent minds
Poisoned their lips
To hurt others
Smiling as they realize
That they're falling
Into her trap
Feeling no sympathy
Green mist surrounds her
Coaxing her victims
In a false sense of security
Wings fluttering in
A seductive manner
Legs harshly marked
With the symbols of evil
Eyes that had seen nothing
But cruelty
Fairy in the dark
Feared by all
She flies in and out of time
Catching those
That stink of fear
Author notes
'blueberry'
A poem about a fairy...x
A contest entry
- Alchemy Gothic - Picture Inspire 3 by Poetic-Theorem.
1000 points, ended December 20, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Thank you for the entry, it was an interesting piece, and an enjoyable read.
Good luck!
'Wolf
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I love evil fairies, they are so much more interesting than the usual 'good' fairy. This was a great piece of writing that oozed darkness throughout the piece. Great imagery again being played in this one. Well done. Keep writing.
All the best
Wayne Leon
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I do like this, the idea of an evil fairy is a good one, this is one of the best pieces I have seen with this theme. Much luck in the contest
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This is a wonderful poem. It actually kind of reminds me of me. I like it a lot, but there's a few flow problems. Maybe you could go back and add a few more descriptive words so it will flow better. Other than that it's a really awesome poem. Alyssa
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I like this, very clever. Evil does kind of sneak in and hide amongst us that we don't know and choses companions of similar. Hate along with evil, are each others best friends. I love the evil fairy idea.
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An evil fairy's kinda different, don't you think?
But it was really the picture that inspired me to write this piece (:
Thanks for commenting!
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Wonderful take on the pictrue inspired contest. I really appreciate you taking the time to enter.
Thank you soooo much
I wish you the very best in the contest,
Mant Blessings for the holidays,
~David~
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Thanks for the HM
I saw a great picture, so I wrote this (:
So glad you liked it
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G'Day mate ♥
Interesting take on the prompt from my husbands contest.
Good luck to you in both the contests
Stay safe
~Manda
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Talented
Okay. Honest opinion...the last line doesn't quite fit. The imagery is good and with a few tweaks on wording I think this could be fabulous. I am impressed, but not overthrown. Also I must note, it concerns me to see a poem that doesn't fit anywhere else in 3 other contests.
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Very interesting and unique. I've never read a poem quite like this before. the poem was well written and it had a nice flow. On a scale from one to ten I'd give it an 8. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan
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