Oh sweet sweet joy
Art thou heroin
Upon my bruised and blistered skin
How I have longed for your use
Like desparate sexual abuse
As he licks you off my naked body
With his pierced tongue
And makes lustful kisses at ease
Ceasing their sinful burning upon my flesh
As I swallow my own blood in lustful respect....
A contest entry
- parched lips by adsaige.
300 points, ended January 13, 2008, 13 entries
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I agree with what van gough said. nice flow, kinda creepy imagery, but still good.
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scary........but good.
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well done!!!! all the lines seem to flow together well.
and vary sexy.
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Heh'... I remember those days. Heroin was quite the seductress when I was younger, and it seems not much as changed in those years.
This is quite a vivid and unique look into the life of an addict, casual or not. Wonderful work, doll.
Victoria;;
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Judged
Yes, darling, I love it. It is most definitely an intersting take on the prompt...a bit original, which is what I was looking for. Thank you for entering.
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