She walks
With an air of confidence,
Despite how people see her
They see her as The Freak,
as The Insanity
She walks the halls
Content with being
Unnoticed
Why can't more be like her?
Wondering and caring
Most definitely caring
Why can't they walk the halls
Content with being
Unnoticed
Author notes
Option #2
Breaking Free
A contest entry
- A Few Options by MourningSun.
450 points, ended December 21, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Reviews???
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amazing
amazing buddy. i want to talk to you about your poetry tomorrow. (p.s. i dont want to say my name so i am going to say i always steal your thunder by saying the time during practice :] ) -
Sometimes it's nice to squeak by unnoticed by others. You can really step back and observe others around you without being noticed. But sometimes it's nice to be noticed by someone, even it it's just a freindly "hello" every-now-and-then.
Well done,
-Garrett
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nice write, for some reason this reminded me of the character Luna Lovegood from Harry Potter (don't know if you read it of not, she reminded me of this piece) realy liked it
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awsome
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it reminds me of someone i know
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that is like so totaly me god thats really good
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nice. this is reallly good.
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Alright. iYou fixed it indeed. i like both the first on eand ths one but they are both greta, thins one does fit the requierments though. Good luck in the contest.
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Now.. i like the poem in itself but for the actual challenge,you need to write about as if you are someone else seeing you. You can leave it as is or you can change it to fit better but that is up to you. It is a great poem though.
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