Have you ever just sat in your own yard,
Ever just sat at the table and eatin' right off the barbeque?
Winter's here and Christmas is coming,
But I still hear the sounds of Summer.
The laughter from my sister and myself, rings in my ears.
So many evenings spent spinning with her,
While our parents sat talking.
I'm eighteen, but I still love it.
You can call me silly or stupid or anything,
I won't care.
I know I wouldn't give anything to change those nights.
Sometimes we don't realize that the big things we do aren't always the best,
Those don't have to be our most cherished moments.
Sometimes it's just the things that aren't planned,
The things that are spur of the moment.
Sometimes those are our most cherished memories,
Even if they are still new.
So next time you see your kids playing,
Or your sibling wants to play or something,
Don't turn it down,
Because that could just be your greatest memory.
A contest entry
- Have you ever... by poetryality.
925 points, ended December 7, 2007, 13 entries
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So true
My mama use to tell my Dad when he would want to settle us down never hush a child when they are happy
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An excellent look at family memories,
'So next time you see your kids playing,
Or your sibling wants to play or something,
Don't turn it down,
Because that could just be your greatest memory'
That is a very good ending and sets home the essence of family love, well done.
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Your sentiments are seemingly genuine. It appears that you have a fondness for family, and that is always good. A very sweet poem is written here. Thank you for this entry, and I wish you the best.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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This is very sweet precious memories to hold and cherish thank you for sharing this with me goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love
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