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Life is the End

To wake up in the morning
Already feeling really bad
No need to drink another beer
As if I needed another one

You can see me one more time
With visions of smiles gone wild
And the sun in my dimming eyes

Looking at my wallet, it overflows
Yet for once i could care less
No need to spend another face
I pay to draw the shades

Friends I need to be certain
Certain of the life we all live
In a new light, like a mushroom gift

Simply wake me one more time
Wake me when I am sane
The cold hold of a ghostly caress

Ghosts real or fake speak once more
"remember, just like death,
life is not the end"

Those dim eyes look at the sun
Brightened by the sight
looking into the past again

Looking into stars deep into the night
Blinded without the suns light
Trying to look into the past again

Just remember when you see me
and the light in the eyes fades
Life is the most total and final end

The street light goes out, the ghosts come out
and life ends...
it's finally time to begin
with my thoughts I will mend

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  • Despairkitty
    December 20, 2007

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    Great job Cast. This was very chaotic and random which I just loved. So much turmil and thought in this.
    Despair

  • ladyshame
    December 20, 2007

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    woah

    i was kind of getting different vibes from the poems...trying o decipher what was going on....but you made me think and i love challenges...so kudos...