sitting in this dark stupor
waiting for something to happen
rocking back and forth
from the constant shaking of my torso
wanting a slap back into reality
but all i can hear is the same melody
playing over and over in my head
echoing a chant thats so familar to my ears
that its now forgotten
i try mouthing the words
but my lips wont open
its like their stitched shut
with tight thread
holding the pain in
letting it run through my viens
the pressure builds
causing my head to throb
I convince my self to lie down
while the agony subsides
Author notes
its option 9,and its about my days when I was extremly depressed.
A contest entry
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400 points, ended December 7, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Oh wow. That's so very gorgeous. Very sad and i'm very sorry to hear that it's how you feel but it's still so very amazingly gorgeous.
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INTENSE
I myself have felt this way before and you conveyed the emotion very well..nice work
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