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I cry in the night
For your touch
Begging for the morning light
This is too much

I long for your kisses
In the dark of night
When I've lost all of lifes blisses
I beg for morning light

I blast the music full blast
To get you off my mind
And to put this pain in the past
Where I will never find

I cry in the night
For your touch
Begging for the morning light
This is too much

I repeat your words in my head
Don't cry for me, live for me
How can I live when I wish I was dead
Your my reason for everything and everything I want to be

I would of drove the knife
Into me a long time ago
Without you in my life
I would of let it all go

I do live for you
As I lie here
The thought of you is stopping me from doing what my shattered heart wants me to do
I need you here

Author notes

I am in a long distance relationship and this is the deepression I am feeling without Chris. it has been very hard on me and my heart. I am a strong women, but this painful love is very hard on me, but I can't let him go. This is option 9.

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  • tylerpuppy
    December 8, 2007
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    loves it

    i love it its very moving


  • VanGoghNights
    December 6, 2007
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    very nice. I like how you repeated I cry in the night
    For your touch
    Begging for the morning light
    This is too much

    it brings intensity to the poem...almost like the pulsing of your blood through your veins, eratic almost..thanks for entering