Through my blood,
I feel the heat.
Emotion's fire,
Burns in me.
Hands clenched tight,
Knuckles white.
Blue veins,
Run straight up my arms
Piercing eyes,
Burn with tears.
Hold them back,
Show no weakness.
Pulsing,red hot,
Blood that burns,
Fire of fury,
A race to rage.
Author notes
option 3
xBluexEyedxGirlx
A contest entry
- A Few Options by MourningSun.
450 points, ended December 21, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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this is really good.
i loved the second stanza.
the poem overall was super emotional and very good
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I like it. It also describes the feelings of being enraged. I am a little short on words right now. so I cannot say much more than that. Great job though.
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