seeping
creeping
deepening &
seeking
your fears letting you hear the screams
the dreams turn to nightmares
and those imaginary red lines are now real
these bloody wounds wont heal
if you try to open your eyes it wont matter
this is your real life fairy tale[and youre in the dungeon]
so come on now lets here you whale lets hear you cry lets see you try to
open your eyes
but this is all you'll ever get so smile and say
please make this go away
and you'll go back to yester-year when you never wished for a
real life fairy tale.
A contest entry
- bring what chaotic poem you posses by choaticrose.
584 points, ended December 11, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark and Suspensful by God is my reality.
1400 points, ended February 23, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I absolutely love this. it's a new twist on Be careful what you wish for. I love how it's a dark twist to it. brilliance
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Interesting. I liked the way it was worded. To me it said, "Be careful what you wish for." I liked what it meant in general and I wish you best of luck.
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Lovely poem, thanks for entering!
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