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With Him

Cool lips move across hot flesh
shivers like electric go through my body
Warm tongue flicks against my skin
a moan escapes from deep inside
Hands move smoothly to secret places
I feel his hard desire teasing me
Lips meet in intoxicating pleasure
our tongues taste each other's lust
Hungry bodies slowly become one
Passion explodes
the sweat of his body covers me
Aching needs relieved
We fall into a forbidden escape.

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  • Fiyre
    December 9, 2007

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    wow

    It reads so well! Might want to edit the word "lust" in line 8, though . I really enjoyed the read!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 9, 2007

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    The melody of love and the instinct of the loveful heart are dancing together bringing the joy of eternal flow..I love this pice.
    Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful piece..well done...