Choose between the blue door,
or choose the red door.
Behind the red door you'll find anger,
you'll find hate.
You'll find all of this,
hidden behind the red door,
of all those hateful feelings that were stored.
Behind the blue door you'll find sorrow,
you'll find hidden all those sad thoughts,
those dappled-gray memories,
all those awful feelings that's been stored up for those years.
Now,
choose between the red or the blue door.
Choose between those feelings you've kept stored up,
and once you choose the door,
all of those will come out.....
Now,
which one will you choose...
the red door or the blue door?
I've already felt it all,
now it's your turn.
Open the door you'll find to your most liking,
good luck.
Author notes
Hope this is alright. I hope that you don't like it, because it has sadness...is that to close to tears??
For contest.
A contest entry
- through the blue door by Cat.
700 points, ended December 12, 2007, 23 entries
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Mary asked me to help with the judging - so here I am.
Quite a choice you've given us here... anger or sorrow - I think I'll choose sorrow, but then, anger is the survival emotion they say...!! Interesting concept!
~ Nicolette
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thank you so much for entering the contest
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