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Christmas Cheers

Christmas cheers fill the room with incense

A beautiful smell full of joy and smiles

 

The beautiful tree with precious decorations

With an angel on top covered with gold

 

My favorite holiday is Christmas 

Such a lovely time of precious everlasting memories....

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i am 10 years old. Christmas means to me.....Joy hsppiness and precious memories!

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    Christmas IS a wonderful time of year, isn't it? I hope yours was a real joy. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
    Brian


  • Kimojuno
    January 9, 2008

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    First off, you should change the background. It does not go well with this font.

    Past that thank you for entering and telling me what Christmas means to you. Your poem is relatively short, however its meaning is not lost. Thank you again.


  • Periwinkle Blue
    December 29, 2007

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    Well said, good poet! What a happy poem this is and it gave me a smile. Thank you for coming in to our happy party.


  • Dancing the Rumba
    December 20, 2007
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    I was totally IN YOUR WORLD as I read that- great job!
    WOW,
    Vivien


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 14, 2007

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    Christmas is a great holiday. So many lovely scents and beautiful images. I really enjoyed reading this. Great job of it :D


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    December 7, 2007
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    A good one sweet heart. You might want to develop your thoughts out a little more. I like how you have used both visual images and have appealed to the sense of smell in your poem. It is always a good idea to use as many of the five senses as possible. Great job! I think if you put a few more ideas in here, it will be really awesome!

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