Christmas Cheers

Christmas cheers fill the room with incense

A beautiful smell full of joy and smiles

The beautiful tree with precious decorations

With an angel on top covered with gold

My favorite holiday is Christmas

Such a lovely time of precious everlasting memories....

Author notes

i am 10 years old. Christmas means to me.....Joy hsppiness and precious memories!

Ages 13 and Under - My Favorite Holiday by Amunet Wolfbane. 450 points, ended December 14, 2007, 4 entries
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100 entries... by Dancing the Rumba. 600 points, ended December 20, 2007, 50 entries
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Happy Poems of all sorts by kids to age 13 by Periwinkle Blue. 550 points, ended January 4, 2008, 19 entries
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What does Christmas mean to YOU? by Kimojuno. 470 points, ended January 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
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For the kids 13 and younger: Anything to cheer me! by Sky Prince Ireland. 300 points, ended January 20, 2008, 31 entries
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Sky Prince Ireland
January 11, 2008

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Christmas IS a wonderful time of year, isn't it? I hope yours was a real joy. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
Brian
Kimojuno
January 9, 2008

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First off, you should change the background. It does not go well with this font.

Past that thank you for entering and telling me what Christmas means to you. Your poem is relatively short, however its meaning is not lost. Thank you again.
Periwinkle Blue
December 29, 2007

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Well said, good poet! What a happy poem this is and it gave me a smile. Thank you for coming in to our happy party.
Dancing the Rumba
December 20, 2007
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I was totally IN YOUR WORLD as I read that- great job!
WOW,
Vivien
Amunet Wolfbane
December 14, 2007

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Christmas is a great holiday. So many lovely scents and beautiful images. I really enjoyed reading this. Great job of it :D
ten thousand cicadas
December 7, 2007
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A good one sweet heart. You might want to develop your thoughts out a little more. I like how you have used both visual images and have appealed to the sense of smell in your poem. It is always a good idea to use as many of the five senses as possible. Great job! I think if you put a few more ideas in here, it will be really awesome!