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Star's

Star's once seen
Hiden by the cloud's
Star's once bright
Now lost from sight

When will the sky Clear?
they dont know
When will the earth be our's ?
They dont know

No star's
Only Rain
Strange Rain
Burning, hurting Rain

No star's
to guide our souls
No star's
To guide the way home

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  • wrayth mind
    December 15, 2008
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    great

    another nice poem written from the heart. Emotions are good fuel for great poetry.


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    June 16, 2008

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    You seem to be in a dark place but my guess is you are a strong person and will not always be there...good writing