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i hate my life

i hate my life
it sux
it is so pointless
it is so so poopy
that is how i see my life
everything goes wrong
every day i screw sumthing up


this really isn't a poem
but i dont care i just wanna let it out

LIFE SUCKS
buh bye

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Written October 28th, 2003

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  • I Am No Poet
    July 12, 2004
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    I can relate. Life can really be a pain in the butt somtimes. But, I am sure your life isn't pointless, and I am sorry that you feel that way. Thanks for your comment on my poem a while back. Maybe we can chat somtime. It would be nice to have someone to relate to.


  • May 25, 2004
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    I know the feeling! Theres alot of times I feel my life sucks but something always happens to make it better. Life isn't supposed to be easy though. There are its ups and its downs. If life were so easy would it be worth living? Each "chapter" of your life and every up and down just teaches you a lesson of what you may have to change or it may even let you become a stronger man. Its what helps you get through each day. You have a whole life ahead of you and trust me it will get better... just look at life and the situations that you are in more positively. If you ever need anyone to talk to Im here... Ive been through things too... I can be ur AP big sis if you want... so if you ever need someone to talk to Ill be there, just drop me a message. Hope everything gets better bro
    luv
    ~ Cristi ~

  • kinkyalysha69
    May 5, 2004
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    im sure that ur life doesnt suck...you just think it does or maybe u are not open with what to do in life...if u ever need to talk just im me....great write....Alysha

  • Shahvana
    March 12, 2004
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    hey, i liked this poem its very intense! Man i'm sure ur life isn't that bad! U are young and have so much to live for! anyhow, well written


  • lovelyscars
    March 1, 2004
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    Hello friend,
    It worked for you this poem I mean. It really did somethng for you and I can enjoy that kind of piece. Please keep up the great work cause your a great writer.
    Twinkle,
    Baby Star


  • Talliegirl23
    January 2, 2004
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    I couldn't believe you.. but it's interesting backrounds.
    Don't yourself you will be okay. I promise you but please promise me you will have a great new year?

  • FatJohn
    December 11, 2003
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    'member me? ^^ Yes, life really does suck horridly at times...but ya know, when you're at the very bottom, think of it this way. The only place you can go from there is up!

  • poeticrafi
    November 3, 2003
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    great

    weither you think its a poem or not, the main point is that you got whatever that was on your chest out, which is good. Keep writing and use this to your advantage. Dont let ANYONE discourage you.


  • fox racer
    October 29, 2003
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    your life isn't near has bad has mine!!!

  • snake
    October 28, 2003
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    i know how u feel and i cant help but agreeing with u on how much life sux!! hope ur feeling better now ay...if ya ever need ne one to talk to im here...have u ritten ne other poems---id luv o read them!


  • milkdrop
    October 28, 2003
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    "poopy" heh.. nice choice of words..

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