Christmas is here
Everyone will be sitting by the fire
Writng christmas lists for Santa to grant
Eating cookies two by two
Playing in the snow
You can tell it's Christmas
In fact everyone should know!
A contest entry
- Christmas,Christmas,Christmas by horsecowgirl.
495 points, ended January 6, 2008, 11 entries
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i've never actually seen or felt snow, but i've been told it's awesome! i like this piece because it's short and yet i know everything i need to know why u love Christmas.
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This is a nice piece! I love Christmas as well. One tiny error is in line 3 the first word you spelled as "Writng" it was just a typo and you left out your other "I". just add that in. No big deal. "Eating cookies two by two" Thats a very good line. thats probably what I will be doing that day! The rhyme at the end was nice as well! Thanks for your entry! Bets wishes and keep up the fabulous writing! Merry Christmas~
~Horsecowgirl~
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Very nice
Yes to snuggle by the fire and talk about your dreams and see the snow falling about the house in such a whisper .Lovely write
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