you don't know what i go through
but you act like you do
i'm trying too hard
to keep my sky from falling
and you're not helping
you call me pathetic and laugh when i cry
call me immature and childish
well look what you've done
this is all your fault
so don't blame me
i'm trying to save myself
and you're almost gone
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Awesome!
This is beautifly written. And it almost made me cay because I can relate to it so much right now. I just broke up with a boy I was in love with because he was tearing me down, and telling me I'm fake. This poem says the words I haven't been able to express for the last few days. Just reading it made me feel batter, almost as if I had said it myself. You have to be a very talented writer to touch someone like that. Keep up the wonderful work! And keep writing, I'm looking forward to reading more.
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very good dear... but so sad... I like it a lot though it's very emotionfull
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uou...I dont think thats a word... but I really likes it alot
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lovely doll
i love it!!
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grea
loved it
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