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And They Go

          Zoom~


Swiftly forward,
  Moving--

Lightning of the Sun's rays,
Dance metallic sheets

Rolling, rolling past
Sleek
How they shine
Whispers of the wheel

Purr, purring light

If you focus in,
they speak, rolling swift
They go

Telling stories of life
many a change
unfolds beneath their
metal rooves-

Feel their vibes in groove?

They know the Wisdom of life,
Swiftly and constant
never-ceasing

Hark, the engines...


                  ~Vroom

Author notes

Cars are one of the neatest inventions by Man, and they just get more awesome in time, I will never get over how much they rule (Yeah, be quiet)...

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  • JesykaDiscostick
    December 10, 2007

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    You would. lmao I think you're the only female I know personally who could voluntarily write a poem about cars lol Good thing you married a man who knows a shitload about them lol While I know about this much about cars...*holds thumb and forefinger a millimeter apart*...I can respect a good poem about them And I don't know how to spell millimeter.
    Anywho, you win a license place that says "homo4evr", a cd of Celtic songs, the moon, a Vicodin, and a 12-pack of Bud Light


  • Keyser Soze
    December 6, 2007

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    Ha - I like it. Maybe I'm just tired, so I couldn't help but think of those nights driving the world away; but yes, I did. Mucho.