Enter from far and coming closer
For the poison that awaits me
Stepping lightly silent soundly
Farther from my dim reality
Seeing in that soft reflection
An evil from beyond my dreams
And all the while I'm drawing nearer
My heart pumping in my teeth
Hollow sounds of cave surround me
Smell of rotting from the graves
Demandingly she beckons me near her
As i stumble to obey
Like a lamb prepared for slaughter
Garnished with delightful fear
I am only a few feet from her
And my horror is spent again
She smirks at my abundant rapture
As she takes a lethal step
Into her need and lust arising
From my blood she gains her speed
And in our unholy union
I see my mortal life in strobe
Flashing upon her brilliant beauty
Blood lust is her power
As she tilts my head so gently
My body quivers with her hardness
Her lips have found the meal no problem
Her teeth embedded in my vein
Hard and fast my death surrounds me
Quaking with that lovely fear
Unto her pleasure i try to struggle
Blood lust is her game
Things around me start to wither
My eyes half-open try to close
But in this half-live state I suffer
Until I cannot take breath again
Her weight is falling on me
I feel moist earth beneath me
Dying is my present gesture
Distantly I hear her laughing...
Author notes
#2
"Poetry is best for letting things out"
A contest entry
- Anything that is funny,or dark and visually appealing by Alive Again.
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I love the flow of your words
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I can almost feel your own suspense when you write this, as if it's my own feelings and my own heart beating harder against my chest. Long, emotional and relatable.
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i like this a lot thanx
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Yay! very good poem emotions gallore I love it thanks so much for your entry
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Thank you for viewing my poem and taking the time to comment. It's always nice when judges do that! Leah
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What a great submission, flawless wordplay and flow. I was lost in the imgery and my own perspective. Great work.
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This is really cool thank you for entering it in my contest. this is what i am looking for. Things like this
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I think I dated that Girl in High School.
just kidding, this is a very Vampress write, makes me want to give up necking.
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Oooh totally cool dark write!
I love the vampiric feel of this piece; I think it rocks
Thank you for sharing this!
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Wow...can someone light a candle or something? *echo* *creepy whispers* What was that?! Just kidding...Lol! Really though…one of the best dark writes I’ve read in a long time.
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That was dark! But! it was honestly a very good dark poem Well verse well thought out with perfect rhythm and rhyme Well done I enjoyed the read.
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