No, its not the thick
My cunning slick
Talk justified lies
For lustful pride.
No, its not the cream
Milked from skinny fiends
Poured along a curb
Where I once served.
No, its not the smile
Of my illegitimate child
Who’s showered by gifts
And gratitude lifts.
It’s the day I gave
Myself to Christ, and was saved.
A contest entry
- Based on Christ by C.o.g..
1200 points, ended December 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Just like one of the readers alrighty commented and said "The ending so important and means so much". It sertianly does mean a very lot to me and especialy to christ. God bless and may you have a long life in his presence.
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You learn and hopefully you grow. Seems like you're growing, and I'm glad for you.
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I love the insight of this. The flow was wonderful and I like the points you highlighted here. It makes it something relatable to everyone.
Good luck!!!
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Liked the flow of this poem, and the brevity of the lines. Says so much in these few lines. The ending so important and means so much. Think you are on th right track here and certainly know what is important in life.
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