Here in front of my mirror,
looking through the glass.
I'm hopeing that it works this time,
but hours just seems to pass.
I slip into memories
of all our talks and dreams.
I think of how it could have been,
if we had acted on those things.
Though I'm happy where I am,
I still long to feel your touch.
A gentle hug just now and then
but maybe that's asking too much.
You gave to me your friendship,
inspiration of the highest degree.
You've made me smile by just being there,
though the result of which, you may never see.
So I stand here in the mirror,
with no more than an outreached hand.
Hopeing for a way to thank you
for showing me you understand.
A contest entry
- Make me feel good by Whyitt U.
2200 points, ended December 19, 2007, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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awww
how nice. i just want to fly a kite now~ which is actually quite fun. you should indulge yourself a quick kite flying extravaganza!
sincerely,
Joe
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This is why I love you Joe.. You confuse the hell out of me and make me laugh at the same time.
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Ooo, I love this! (as usual :-p)
Thanks for the memories
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The flow and ryhme are wonderful and it made me just want to hug you...and be hugged back, it made me Feel good, and that was the goal...so thanks for that! Also I love the use of the mirror, it's a weakness of mine. all in all, excellent...thank you for sharing!! Good Luck!!
Wyatt
xxx
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