I hate that you can do this to me...
You can hold me captive in my own life.
I am nothing like I used to be...
I wish I could sever our tie with a jagged knife.
I want to make you feel all of the pain I feel...
I hope you choke on all of your false words.
I want you to see that my world is real...
And that I once had dreams, until I let you push them away.
I want to make you cry...
And beg for mercy the way I have had to do too many times.
I want to watch you slowly die...
I want to take and burn all your false rhymes.
I want you to see me as blood is dripping...
And be in the hospital wondering if I will make it.
I want to push you if you are slipping...
I want you to know that I was always legit.
I want to watch you burn in the firey pits of HELL...
And scream for help and have no one come.
I want you to fail as I excel...
I hope you can feel all the pain, and not go numb.
I want to watch as the life drains from your eyes...
I want to be the last face that you see.
I will laugh when I hear your pleading cries...
And I know you will remember ME!
A contest entry
- Scream it, Vent it out!!! Pissed?!?! Come let it out!! by tinydarkgoddess.
550 points, ended February 4, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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mmmm damn pretty twisted mind i see ... so you must not be fond of my friend anthony i see ... haha he can be a jerk.... lmao good write though i like the emotion and total hate you put into this one... let it out babe!!!
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Very nice, definitely a "in-your-face" write, loved the easy flow, thank you for taking the time to enter the contest, great.
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well done
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