Broken windows
Shatter onto the floor
Distress unspoken
Collaboration no more
Once united,forming one
Shards dispersing bright lights
As prisms scatter light through out the room
Rising senses to new heights
Reaching to touch
Tearing through skin
Droplets of blood
Descending upon the floor
Wilting flower buds
Dwindling perfection
Wanting to hurt you no more
Author notes
Prompt - Broken Windows
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt (RESERVE) Quickie by uu11.
450 points, ended December 9, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sad, dark and painful write. It reads smoothly and makes sense in a selfless sort of way. Nice write.
s ~Genie~
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Thank you sweetie.....
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Wow
See your talent is endless from nature to Dark to loving and kind, you are a well rounded writer thats something to be proud of in its own amazement
Awsome write you have penned here!!!
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Awsome!!!!!!
Now clean it up! JK LOL
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will do you goof
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i luv
i see why you won
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Thank you
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Hi!
Dear Mystical Rayne,
Sounds awesome!
This line got me confused:
(Wanting to hurt you no more)
Take care!
Scarzat
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wow really well done, i really like the prism part it gives a different dimension to the poem. I really feel the emotion.
Thanks for entering
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Thank you so much
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this was brilliant.
i dont have anything else i can say to this.
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Thank you
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WOW,you are very talented!a dark writing.You use similes and metaphors very well.nice flow in your poem as well.Well done,poetress!
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Thank you my friend
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really good auntie i love you
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Thank you Sweetie
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