seedy looking paint
creates an opening
inappropriate color
doesn't hide the truth
harlot skid row door
desolate discrepancy
Author notes
blue door picture http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2380/948.jpg?1197705443
left align for through the blue door
A contest entry
- through the blue door by Cat.
700 points, ended December 12, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes & Fresh Writes Welcome Here! by LadyUnique.
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Comments
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stark and it works
thank you for entering and good luck 
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Excellent
Very well done. A great creation.
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Interesting piece here
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now you did it! i'm going to be singing skid row the rest of the day...
effective use of brevity and concise language- nice addition to the contest- thanks so much for entering
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I'm helping Mary with the judging.
A short piece that describes the picture quite accurately.... it felt like this poem was about the physical door itself. The "harlot" reference does add a different dimension to it thought. Thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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