Moving through your world like a ghost
I watch you grow through every smile and frown
Wishing to touch your smooth soft skin
I keep back and watch in yearning
I was there when you danced
I was there when you fell
Watching over you as you sleep
Moving through your world like a ghost
I’m sad to say I am a ghost
Watching your every move
I envision our loving embraces
If only you knew that I was there
Would you fall in love or run in fear?
If only you saw me in the mirror
Moving through your world as a ghost
I lay beside you as you sleep
Stroking your skin with unfeelable touches
You turn as my wish comes true
Eyes widening they turn to tears
You ask where I’ve been all these years
I say by your side as I always will
You fly into my arms with kissing embrace
How sweet love is
Even after deaths kiss
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like the write: a ghosts love. this is wonderful, with little more feeling and tweaking you have a winner here. condense what you are saying and put more meaning into thoughts of your being a ghosts. lol.




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cool, haunting,
my favorite part is
"How sweet love is Even after deaths kiss"

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oooo this is really good and it has that crawling on your sceen feel. guess cuz it envolves a ghost, who knows. either way, very very nice, no marvilous.


