I feel like I lost the other half of me
Because the half of my hearts not where its suppose to be
I feel confused ready to give in to the voices of my friends
But what they say all depends on what you want me to do
Should I run and hide away from you
Why do I care so much is something wrong with me
Is it that obvious to see
That I miss our friendship so much that I should let this go
Or should I just sit and smile so that no one else will know
Will you just send me a sign
So I will know why I lost something that was never mine
A contest entry
- My Shining Star by My Last Breath.x.
550 points, ended December 7, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - * * * loving you forever ? * * * by The Hardest Goodbye.
450 points, ended December 28, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like this poem. i know it came from the heart <3 good luck in my contest!
xo
kandy -
Judge Says
This is adorable, yet so sad. You can definatly feel the pain you're going through. I especially love the first two lines, and the last line!
Good luck in the contest!
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