go ahead, go ahead and kill me
but dont be dissapointed when i don't bleed
youve bled me dry, no emotion, no cares
look around, look at all the stares
kill me with a knife, and make it quick
and within me your kiss will stick
and though your stabbing me through and through
with my last breath ill whisper i love you
kill me with a gun and aim perfect
but before you do make sure its worth it
ill be gone forever, this is true
and with my last breath ill whsiper i love you
kill me with a rope and make sure it holds
and watch as the note in my hands unfolds
im sorry about all ive done and i wish you knew
that with every last breath ill whisper i love you
so if you must go ahead and kill me
ive tried my best and you must agree
so if you must go ahead and start
just promise you wont kill me with a broken heart
Please tell me what you think
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I really adore the ending..
also how you repeat "with every last breath I'll whisper I love you". That is love. Cute.
Well done =)
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kill me with a knife, and make it quick
and within me your kiss will stick
and though your stabbing me through and through
with my last breath ill whisper i love you
i love that part.
i love that stanza,
good job.
I love this poem, its to her huh?
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yes
yes that poem is to her
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not to bad mike I like this it was well written and I could feel the emotion.
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thanks bro
thanks man, yah i was feeling kinda in teh dog house when i wrote this but i gues we both know how that feels eh
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wow
what a strong and dark poem you've written. fantastic. specially liked the repition of "with my last breath ill whisper i love you".
i loved it. great poem!
keep it up
x
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thanks sweetheart
thank you, yah i meant for that one line to hit home on a lot of people and i think it worked
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