Atrocious hue of darkness
scavenger seeking m' soul
vigorously; impaled sorrow
I shall savor... thy wrath!
Why all the clamor?
Evil succulent mayhem
masquerading as sunshine
there’s no empty disguise!
In quietude I sit, I ponder.
Unspoken words spreading
pain; echoing from my pores.
Need I speakth anymore?
M' patience, m' existence
rooted in power from above
what hast thou to offer?
'Tis naught to do with
heavenly love.
I shall love thee
forever
Author notes
Telling your mate you have accepted your fate, and that you love him....
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A contest entry
- Your Best Pre-write of 2007 by Metaphorist.
900 points, ended January 4, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful piece here that really took me away with it to somewhere else. I was lost within this piece here. Such a talanted write. Such atmosphere too. Well done Novy.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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I REALLY LIKED THIS ONE
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This is really wonderfully written. I really enjoyed this. I think that you have gotten your point across very well. Nicely done.
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Did not expect that last line at all. I enjoyed the intense emotion and imagery in this.
Thanks for entering. Good luck in my contest and in the new year! -
If
This is a calling to a lover or seeking out God it is a strong statement of hurt , pain and the need to know
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This is a great imagery on the prompt
very deep, continued to draw me in as I proceeded in reading. I think you did great
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Well written novy. Good luck in the contest.
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death is unspeakable , you spoke it well best of luck on this super poem xx peter
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