Many million
Exhausting errands
Running ragged
Remembrances, readying
Year-end yule.
Concerts, Carols
Harking heralding
Rejoicing refrains;
Infant, icicles
Shimmering shining;
Tidings, togetherness
Making memories
Angels anthems
Sweetly singing.
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
- Christmas 12 OPTIONS (Lots of Winners!!!!!) by Poetry and I Inc.
3890 points, ended December 8, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Looks like you need a line of greeting cards with tight and appropriate phrases that say much.
And this one does. I reeeeeeeeeeally LIKE this one. My senses recall all of them.
Good entry for the contest......that I hope you place!
Thank you............Warmly, CookieZeal
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This was very creative in how you expressed the birth of Christ and yet we see the other side of Christmas: carols being sung and etc. Very well done my dear. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
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great write it was very nicely penned keep up the good work and best of luck in the contest.
thanks for sharing this -
Nicely penned. I really enjoyed this. You capture every aspect of christmas in this piece, right from the constant errands of shopping, to the beautiful memories made and the past memories remembered. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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