A thousand words could never explain,
the way I feel for you.
The way your eyes meet mine,
and the way you make me shiver.
The course of a complete reaction,
denying me my rightful feelings.
Delaying my truth and innocence,
for the depth of reality.
You see through my heart,
as well as my soul.
You show me the way to peace,
as I would show you the way home.
The integrity you show,
when you are sharing it with me.
The lithium covered stains of hurt,
coursing you through your pit of insanity.
You cover my warmth,
with your smell of cheap cologne.
Yet you still shadow my flavors,
as an after taste of life.
Bearing your child,
and delivering your demon.
A contest entry
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1400 points, ended February 23, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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Wickedly sharp ending there, Dear Poet.
Your words slice just as
I'm sure you intended them to.
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Oh what a beauty... the ending is very profound..
Well done here...
delila
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That was a really strong piece......seeming to be filled with intense feelings and thoughts.....great work!
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This seemed sweet and somehow evil. I like it.
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