Shuffle
Shuffle
Unnnh
Shuffle
Unnnh
Unnnh
BLAM!
thud
gurggle
*silence*
A contest entry
- I want genious, abstract, something deep. by BigE.
300 points, ended December 6, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short and sweet.
Like it... I laughed but probably should'nt have.
Cheers.
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Thanks, its ok to laugh.
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Sounds like a song....I like good job!!
Deep and funny how did you get this idea anyway? -
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I wrote this in the middle of a biology class. It just popped in my head. Thanks for the comment.
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Unique
Very unique, though I'm not sure if those are moans of pain or pleasure. Good write, very very unique style you have. Nice work. Thank you for entering.
Steven -
OK..
I might need help with this one.. The thud did not sound good though.. it may of hurt.. am I on with that one.. LOL..
Thanks for sharing, it's fun to pen..
-Timothy aka poeticweaver
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