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Hidden Passion

Wistful sprits of misty gray
weave together as they play -
dancing in the silver moonlight
with eyes of stardust glittering bright -
shy smiles conceal a greater love
which none could ever rise above;
tears of joy fall from the atmosphere,
raining their ecsatsy upon each thing near
to these two hearts beating as one -
never to part, nor be undone.

Author notes

I'm up for any female position.

I chose two options, really - two and three. (Seeing as I don't mind which position I get, I decided to write something which would apply to both options.)

My username is Misfortune. (For the record.)

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  • Temptation.
    December 18, 2007

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    wow. this is really good. great write!

    great imagery
    Wistful sprits of misty gray
    weave together as they play -
    dancing in the silver moonlight
    with eyes of stardust glittering bright

    thats my favorite part