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Sugar Coated

Door knob turns,

in patter small feet.

The start of my day,

is a whispering "good morning daddy it's time to play".

Standing there eyes smiling,

those Fluttering toes in anticipation for me to rise.

A joyful occasion for us to wake,

and listen to the birds sing their morning song.











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Charles M. Wilkins

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    A good write. Heartfelt. Touching. You paint a delightful picture with this piece. Thanks for sharing.


  • MysticalRayne
    December 6, 2007
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    I love this - a perspective from the other side - nicely penned


  • HaleighGrace
    December 6, 2007
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    So Nice

    awww--this so very pretty!!!!