Secrets rise as sun sets;
spirits of night never forget
mortality of light
Starry rosettes
left to burn til
morning may return
Still they yearn;
about the infinite universe
yet to learn.
Author notes
I happened to write this a few hours ago and upon seeing your contest, I thought it might fit.
A contest entry
- I want genious, abstract, something deep. by BigE.
300 points, ended December 6, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great Write
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The imagery si stunning with this piece Allamanda! The content is sureal yet wonderfully expressed. I like the meaningful message this so freely shares and the picture you have painted masterfully
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I really like this piece thank you for sharing this with me.Goodluck in the contest.Best wishes and much love
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Great
My intitial reaction to this was sheer brilliance. The first stanza is strong, and holds it's strength throughout the entire piece. This was a great read, and I thank you for sharing.
Steven
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