Why is everything I do wrong?
All you can see is the imperfections
Thats not all there is to me
I can do somethings right
So why cant you see that?
I do try
I want to be perfect for you
So that you can see my good quality's
It's not fair that you always assume the worse
I don't understand why?
WHY?
Am I that horrible?
When did I become so unbearable
I want you to see everything there is to me
Why cant you just try,
Try to care about me again?
A contest entry
- I want genious, abstract, something deep. by BigE.
300 points, ended December 6, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Childrens Cries (Ages 11-15) by Nostalgia.
450 points, ended December 10, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Stupid?
Comments
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Um...I liked the theme of this piece, the wanting, the hoping, the praying to be loved, but I didn't really enjoy this piece overly much. Though that might just be me
Thanks for your entry though.
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Not sure what to say about this. IT didn't make much of an impact the first time I read it...the second, or the third. I understand the concept, I only think it lacks the dimension of a genious. Thanks for entering.
Steven
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