Fruitcake here, fruitcake there
I see fruitcake everywhere.
It comes alive in my mind
a fruitcake of a different kind.
It seems like it's staring at me,
those fruity eyes I can see.
I will look the other way
I don't like fruitcake anyway.
I see fruitcake like no other,
I gave fruitcake to another.
It looked at me with a smile
then that fruitcake left for a while.
It never came back again you see,
that fruitcake that was here with me.
I didn't know what else to do,
that fruitcake probably went to you.
A contest entry
- FRUITCAKE by Melodies.
600 points, ended December 8, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Well, I wish it would come to me...
I DOUBLE, TRIPLE LOVE FRUITCAKE AND I NEVER BUY THEM AND NOBODY GIVES ME ONE, EITHER.
Heck. Fruitcakes cost so much... oh well. I might steal one. Do you think a store would press charges? Do you think a jury would find me guilty? I love your poem.
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LOL.
OK, um, not sure what to say, but awesome rhyme I guess.
Thanks for sharing, and all the best in this contest!
Peace, -Timothy aka poeticweaver
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