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Electric Can Opener

Not for use, The lable said,
For entry on the top!

I was flabbergasted
With the object I had bought.

Electric Can Opener, I read.
I had dirty thought.

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For a contest with the prompt "Electric Can Opener", with a 30 word limitation.

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • natchstucco
    December 10, 2007
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    hah so funny. well written for the length given. bloody hell those cans.


  • Blind-Ambition
    December 9, 2007
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    Great write, I especially like the ending. good luck in the contest.

    thanks for your comments.


  • Mirthryl
    December 5, 2007
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    Makes you wonder who writes the instructions!?


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    LOL, well I really do not know where to go from here on this one...creative and the ending could be taken a few was...yet some how I find my mind wondering in the gutter.
    Love it.
    Thank you for entering!


  • Tirrell
    December 5, 2007

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    roflmao, this is very cute,
    love the imagery and the rest that is left
    to the reader. I enjoyed this much.


  • Griswold silver member
    December 5, 2007

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    ROFLMAO, Nicely and humorously written for this prompt, best of luck to you in this contest... Scott

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