I sang to him, he looked at me.
Snow falling all around us.
He took my face in his hands,
And whispered,
"Hail to thee my Snow White Queen."
Entwined neath gray sky,
Entangled in the snow, we keep each other warm.
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Author notes
so i chose the picture...and two of the quotes to get me started...but if due to power problems in my city this doesn't get finished...take it as is.
A contest entry
- what exactly have you won? by black lagoon x.
420 points, ended December 22, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"Hail to thee my Snow White Queen."
thank you for entering our contest,i did like this,and you did have the right idea,but i think pixie would like it a little better if it had a darker ending.Call her bitter,but it's her contest...I personally enjoyed reading this,however.
Good luck in our contest
-Phoenix -
Wow...so lovely sweet...I wish I could feel this way with someone...XP
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Beautiful Words.
What a wonderous piece, and a feel good ending.
Thanks for sharing, and shine on poet!
Peace, -Timothy aka poeticweaver
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