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See you ‘round, babe.

I suppose this is all I get
The big guy told me I’ve got to go
They’ve got a big spread waiting for me up in the clouds
So, this is it

The love you’ve shown me
The kindness in your heart
The fire that burns in your soul
Will never be forgotten

I still remember out first time together
You were so timid
I was so afraid
But it grew into something beautiful

I can’t say I’m too bent out of shape, though
What’s waiting for me is something we can’t comprehend
My soul already feels lighter than ever
Apart from the first time I saw you

I wish I could say goodbye
I wish I could sob along with you
I know you’re upset
But never fear

You see, where I’m going is someplace wonderful
Where tears and sorrow are foreign
And the best part is you’ll be there, too, someday
And we will be reunited

So, this isn’t goodbye, my love
As a matter of fact, this is only a bitter-sweet prelude
This life of ours is so short and so stressful
The next one is where things really get going

I can't say farewell or so long
It wouldn’t be appropriate
I guess all I can really say is

See you ‘round, babe

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  • BluesMan gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    Heart felt. Good luck in the contest


    These two lines are my favorite They floored me!

    My soul already feels lighter than ever
    Apart from the first time I saw you


  • Rejected Freak
    December 5, 2007

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    Awwww this one made me want to cry....I could just see this girl crying...and this boy saying this although she couldn't hear. It was a very sad scene - but the words were so loving it softened the blow.

    Well done. Keep it flowing. xx.