O Christmas Tree

Wonder
Angels glowing,
bells tinkling, lights twinkling,
ornaments, cookies, candy canes,
garlands strung of silver or gold, tinsel
hanging on pine branches of green.
Baby's first Christmas Day,
eyes glowing in
wonder.

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Rictameter... WONDER

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A contest entry

Many Options by piccola. 900 points, ended December 14, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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tawk
January 31, 2008

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Hood-Wink!
What a wonderful Christmas tree!! You have captured the feelings one feels when seeing a Christmas tree. A beautiful Rictameter!! I love the background to
piccola
December 14, 2007

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Lovely Rict although the large font took away from the shape that it should take on. Great BG too. Thank you for
taking all this time and for entering the contest.
- debilynn
  December 15, 2007
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  i didn't realize it had misshaped. all fixed now. thank you for bringing that to my attention
Puppydog
December 6, 2007

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O MY!!!! WHAT A BEAUTIFUL TREE!!!!
All of these things are which really does make a Christmas tree beautiful!!!!
Heavenly Angel
December 6, 2007

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Awww this is just too sweet and beautifully sentimental
I wish you the very best of luck in this contest, hon!
goalsv
December 6, 2007

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Very good discription while keeping with the form theme. Such a perfect discription and feelings of Christmas.
imperfectperfection
December 5, 2007

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So Cute
Deb hun this is so sweet and tender and beautifully written... you've captured the feelings and emotions going through little baby's mind as the baby looks with awe to First Christmas shining through right before her/his eyes... you've heart of an angel no wonder you could capture little angel's heart... good luck in the contest... take care Minoo