His entrance.
Her eyes diffused
precocious, pink;
now drawn downward
by inhibited ignition
to Bobby’s socks
Two root beers,
floating...
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt 16 entries 20 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended December 6, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want Gold Trophy Winners Judged by RedwingSpirit.
900 points, ended January 11, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Boffo!
Oh, so beautifully tight and clean. Reminds me of the line of James Joyce's ... " ... leaving space between the words so the ideas can come out ... ".
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paulcreates Very nice and great take of mysticstorms prompt. Excellent poem Dear I wish you the best of luck in my contest. Thanks for re-entering lol sorry about that.
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Congrats on the gold...
this is truly worthy...
great job!
Blessings! Tammy -
oh...this is TOO precious!!!
very well done...
what a sweet moment captured in lovely ink...
great take on the prompt indeed!
Blessings! Tammy
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Thank you Tammy.
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This is adorable!!
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Thank you Cara.
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How wonderful!~
I adore this write...remember the days and the hope in little hearts of something special to emerge.
Wonderful work.
Thank you for entering! -
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mysticstorm thank you once again for hosting another contest and thank you for that glittery sparkly thingy too!
Paul
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