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Sweet Release

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Sweet Release

 

 

 

As I lay upon my bed afraid to close my eyes

air escapes my lips in sensual wanton sighs,

every single fibre within my body burns

waiting for this man, oh how my spirit yearns.

 

Bathed in moonless wonder I feel a cooling breeze

my body being kissed, by he who’d gently tease,

hands caress my breasts, a moan escapes my lips

my skin ablaze with fire touched by fingertips.

 

Unseen trails descending weave their magic spell

milk white thighs revealing passions inner well,

a pearl that glows with pleasure hardens at the graze

the heat within my treasure shines with honeyed glaze.

 

Emotions climbing higher search for sweet release

you, my secret lover, will give me inner peace.

 

 

 

 

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  • ceegeeess
    December 12, 2007

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    Pinnacle of sex!

    Emotions climbing higher search for sweet release

    you, my secret lover, will give me inner peace." This reflects the wisdom of experience in sex, so beautifully. Thank you sweet Sue for such great thought expressed so simple and beautiful!Bathed in moonless wonder I feel a cooling breeze" so picturesque and vivid making one feel real on reading. Nice write , sweet angel!

    my body being kissed, by he who’d gently tease,

    hands caress my breasts, a moan escapes my lips

    my skin ablaze with fire touched by fingertips.







  • A floatingleaf silver member
    December 10, 2007
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    Great write Sue, a turn on for any guy...Leaf


  • owlishhunter
    December 8, 2007

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    An amazingly done piece you have here for sure...I can say little else but...WOW! Great work and a well deserved trophy to you...congrats!


  • Dok
    December 6, 2007
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    WOW!!!

    Sue darling, this is excellent! Very sensual, almost peaceful pleasure… Well done.

  • Bad Bill
    December 6, 2007

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    Sultry, sensual and downright sexy, you naughty minx you! High-grade explosive material here, Sue, which well-deserved gold.

    Bill


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    Oooh how wonderfully sensual and sultry!
    Most excellent pen of love and passion
    All the best to you in the contest!


  • Quill
    December 6, 2007
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    Good luck in the contest,great image used.


  • moonbumps silver member
    December 6, 2007

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    Good luck with this hot steamy write...not doing me any good reading this as I'm in my tea break and i'm working til 7pm-steam is filling the staffroom as I speak!!!


  • arafura gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    a pearl that glows...

    Some of the most effective erotic imagery I've seen in a poem in many a long day! This is totally sensual and spellbinding... A winner for sure!


  • Ellis gold member
    December 6, 2007
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    You Go Girl !!!

    Professional Grade writing Very Stimulating
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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    December 6, 2007

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    Wonderful Work

    Stunning writing and very very sensual as well. Great imagery here. I like the way that this rhymes and the words virtually slow move across the screen, embedding themselves into the reader's mind. Well done Sue. This was brilliant work.

    Love always
    Wayne
    xx


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    Beautifully and so sensually penned. A beautiful entry. All the best to you
    Gaylene


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    December 5, 2007

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    Excellent entry. Softly sensual and full of passion.
    Nicely done.
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    Storm


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 5, 2007
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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    wow i love the milky thighs,,the heat within your treasue superb,and highly sensul miss C VERY BEST OF LUCK TO YOU XXXX PETER

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