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No nothing tonight


No "love you"s, no red kisses tonight
No teasing, no looking together at the sky
You're sitting alone, on that sofa I hate
drinking your scotch and mumbling my name

I'm not in the room, I've already left

you didn't move, just looked away

I'm sitting alone, watching the show that you love

I'm biting my nails and cursing the host 

You're not in the room, you're oh so away

no reason to move, no risks yet to take

You look at the time, it's already late

should you just call me and make it ok?

We are tearing apart, all that is left

of kisses and love, just breaking our necks

You hurt me, I hurt you and now that we're done

all that I can think of is that you're gone

I look at your picture and sob in my soul

my fingers are red, can't feel them no more

and thought it seems I should have told you 

you idiot,go die means i love you

 

 

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Option 2: use quotes
I obviously used "you idiot,go die means i love you"

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  • Peppermint star xxx
    December 7, 2007

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    wow.i have to show the other judges this entry.have you ever expirienced daily coincidences? because you captured this in a magnificent artistic symphony of stanzas that will blow them away.It's almost as if you're gifted on an un-humanly level.Thank you for entering our contest dear,and good luck,although you probably won't need it.

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    • Latradi
      December 8, 2007
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      Aww you'll make me blush!
      Thank you for your words, you are very kind.. I just found the quote really powerful, I guess it really hit something in me and inspired me...
      Thank you very much for your lovely comment... (See now my face's all red )
      Latradi