The shed outside holds nothing.
The moon shines brightly but alas
there is nothing still.
A dusty window pane
staind with the ashes of the ages,
dramatic fires, and melancholy waters.
The moon was counting crows
by row, by row, by row.
Among the hedges, beside the ring
where farmers often sowed.
That which would be life,
and through the pains of strife.
Life, would flourish...
into a twilight garden sight...
The farmer sowed as he should.
but no rose ever blossom,
could no beautiful words echo?
Not one? to break the stilling airs delight?
To break free into the roaring night?
No...what would bring life has brought a storm
ripped all that was sowed into her hands.
She took all except the shed
and left him defensless, alone...
Ruining a life, left to wither, to be dead
The farmer now lays beside, the lonesome empty shed
Author notes
this was for a contest and some feelings a girl once sent me, i had to re enter it since the first one i sent i accidently tagged it with adult
A contest entry
- A love that was never real but the pain after was by MysteriousMoonlight.
875 points, ended December 29, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hm...well, what do think really, an honest opinion of what you think of the poem and what you think it means.
Comments
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Thanks for re entering it!!

