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Skinny Jean Whore

Look at her
Just look at her
All dolled up with no where to go

Painted red lips
Dramatic eye lashes
She's known as the "Scene girl"

[But please she's hardly in between]

Funny thing is this girl is all [me]
Or maybe was once just me
A bitchy ass fashionista in the making

A skinny jean whore
With no where to go
Dressed up to please people
Dressed up to kill



Author notes

This title came to me just a few minutes ago...I own a few pairs of shinny jeans..and I know its also this big fashion fad...a big thing going on in my school.It's not only the so called "scence" kids...its everybody

Basically this poem is funny look on life...not mines specifically...but people in general

I hope no one is affended

[go and laugh]

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  • mozarts funeral gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    Good point and good poem, however it's spelled scene you might want to change it! thank you for entering in my contest!!


  • broken skylines
    February 6, 2008
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    I really liked this one. :]


  • autumns rising
    December 7, 2007

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    nice
    i like skinny jeans though i dont have any
    lol there pretty cool
    anywho great poem, it made me laugh
    "Painted red lips
    Dramatic eye lashes
    She's known as the "Scence girl"

    [But please she's hardly in between]"
    fanastic.