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Now you say your leaving

Now you say your leaving,
i want to find ways to make
you stay
i don't want to believe it,
this feeling i have for you
keeps getting stronger

Now you say your leaving
do you really need to go
is there something there you
would like
better than me
i want to tell you I Love You
i want to tell you my feelings
i don't care if i get a kiss
or not my feelings are still
the same

Now you say your leaving
don't i get a say in this
if or when you leave
it will break my heart
I'm losing someone i love
i don't want the
feelings to change

now you say your leaving
should i just give up
on you now?

  dedicated to Dustin, used option 3

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  • Shadow Darkstar
    December 6, 2007

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    I didn't really like the repition, but the message of the poem is pretty good. Maybe you could develop this more. It seems to be filled with nothing but questions, and I didn't find that it helped here, but at least you entered. Good luck.