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[ fruit cake ]

fruit cake
doorbell rings
as that relative enters!

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Its a prewrite, but the link for prewrites wasn't working for me.............LOL

http://allpoetry.com/poem/2413381

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  • Melodies
    December 8, 2007

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    Precious cake...

    I do love your wee poem so much and can just see the scene.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    December 5, 2007
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    A great LOL about the infamous holiday fruitcake! Good luck in the contest!


  • DawnBaby
    December 5, 2007

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    Ha,ha,ha,ha!

    This is so TRUE! Ah the holidays when all the fruitcakes come out to celebrate. Great job!