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four paged letter (part one)

Your sarcasm for one is outta this WORLD!!!
Cause you make me wonder if you're being decietfully honest, or honestly lying.
And TWO your sarcastic answers make me wonder if you care for what I'm sayin
or if you even care how you make me feel. (call me sensitive I don't care)
And HONESTLY, with you, I'm unsure if I wanna stay.
and THREE, I want to take you seriously atleast HALF the time
instead of cocking my head to the side, wondering "was that a sarcastic line?"
Then you have your days were you wanna be mean
and sometimes I be tired and don't wanna deal wit' it see
if you're mad at the world, then don't take it out on me
"I'm just playing," you say, but then again, are you really?
See THAT'S what I'm talkin about, your sarcasm gets me paranoid
either you chill out with all that, or else our relationship will be destroyed.
I blame your parents for a job half done
cause although I wann make up for the love they didn't show,
I ain't got time to try and "RAISE" you, and be with you
if that's the case then we might as well take a break to let our friendship grow.
And just to let you know, I am your man and I treat you like a Queen
but sometimes you treat me like a boy tryna get a dip of your love in between.
And your faith in me is so HURTFULLY THIN,(if there's any at all)
when I say to you that I can protect you, not to mention MYSELF
your doubt is so PAINFULLY OBVIOUS like you don't see me as a man at all.
You belittle me with your words and your sarcasm baby...
I thought you treat your man like a king?
That's what you said before our relationship took flight after gaining it's wings.
and speaking of wings, I feel like burnin them damn things.
I see I made a mistake in showing you my soft side
because obviously soft is all I am in your eyes.... to be continued

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  • SOLS.Moonlight
    December 6, 2007
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    I guess she made you mad? Like squizzle said it's good your letting it out.


  • Lady Purple
    December 6, 2007
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    she really tick u off huh? but anyway good and i agree wit squizzle.


  • Expression
    December 5, 2007

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    hmmmm wow this very,....honest...who is this for. Anyway good job letting your feelings out...i wud HATE to feel the wrath of the next parts